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Monday, December 05, 2011
Adventure writing
Hi, my students, I would like to inform you that writing is a basic skill in learning English, so it is important to practise writing to develop your language skills.
Adventure in the jangle On last holiday, I went to the jangle with my family.
When we came to the jangle, we took many rests, Then, I said to my brother to played with me, and then he said to me yes, I want to played with you, When, I and my brother went to played, We saw many animals in the jangle, Then we went many steps we saw a large ground no one there ( NO ANIMALS_NO PEOPLE S), Then we went their to played, Then, I played with my brother, When we come back we make a big race with my brother, Who win he well took a(5000)£, Then I said (1-2-3) then to started the game, Then, I and running my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then, I went to my family and I said for my family my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then my family said for me to went to your brother, When, we came to his brother, Then we saw the brother he isn’t has a leg because the lion ate the leg, Then, My mother started crying. (THE ADVENTURE IS VERY TEIRRIBLE ) Name: Khalid Islam shah Class: 1-2
Adventure in the jangle On last holiday, I went to the jangle with my family.
When we came to the jangle, we took many rests, Then, I said to my brother to played with me, and then he said to me yes, I want to played with you, When, I and my brother went to played, We saw many animals in the jangle, Then we went many steps we saw a large ground no one there ( NO ANIMALS_NO PEOPLE S), Then we went their to played, Then, I played with my brother, When we come back we make a big race with my brother, Who win he well took a(5000)£, Then I said (1-2-3) then to started the game, Then, I and running my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then, I went to my family and I said for my family my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then my family said for me to went to your brother, When, we came to his brother, Then we saw the brother he isn’t has a leg because the lion ate the leg, Then, My mother started crying. (THE ADVENTURE IS VERY TEIRRIBLE )
Adventure in the jangle
ReplyDeleteOn last holiday, I went to the jangle with my family.
When we came to the jangle, we took many rests, Then, I said to my brother to played with me, and then he said to me yes, I want to played with you, When, I and my brother went to played, We saw many animals in the jangle, Then we went many steps we saw a large ground no one there ( NO ANIMALS_NO PEOPLE S), Then we went their to played, Then, I played with my brother, When we come back we make a big race with my brother, Who win he well took a(5000)£, Then I said (1-2-3) then to started the game, Then, I and running my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then, I went to my family and I said for my family my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then my family said for me to went to your brother, When, we came to his brother, Then we saw the brother he isn’t has a leg because the lion ate the leg, Then, My mother started crying. (THE ADVENTURE IS VERY TEIRRIBLE )
Name: Khalid Islam shah
Class: 1-2
Adventure in the jangle
ReplyDeleteOn last holiday, I went to the jangle with my family.
When we came to the jangle, we took many rests, Then, I said to my brother to played with me, and then he said to me yes, I want to played with you, When, I and my brother went to played, We saw many animals in the jangle, Then we went many steps we saw a large ground no one there ( NO ANIMALS_NO PEOPLE S), Then we went their to played, Then, I played with my brother, When we come back we make a big race with my brother, Who win he well took a(5000)£, Then I said (1-2-3) then to started the game, Then, I and running my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then, I went to my family and I said for my family my brother fell down and broke his ankle, Then my family said for me to went to your brother, When, we came to his brother, Then we saw the brother he isn’t has a leg because the lion ate the leg, Then, My mother started crying. (THE ADVENTURE IS VERY TEIRRIBLE )